Latest Story Ideas and Characters

Here are all the ideas that came from last Friday.  Thanks to all of you and to Mrs Pearson for doing so much when I was not there!!


13 November 2009, 08:52 by Stephanie



hi Peter,




we've come up with a few characters and some scenes.




Character 1- Jumbia. Boy,tall,cheeky,naughty,11 years old. He follows the children to the tree and gets cursed just like the chosen ones./ 2 kids.



Character 2 Lulia. Girl,small,polite, well behaved, 10 years old. Sister of Jumbia and daughter of the twahiki tribe.( tribe discovered by Francis Bacon.) Her brother (with the curse) was sent out to the mountains to become a slave. It was her job to save him from the curse (he would never return to the twahiki tribe the only way he could see his tribe is if he escaped




ideas by Stephanie and Cerys






13 November 2009, 08:53 by Christopher


Hi Peter,






This is our description of our character we chose. The character is the old Granpa.






The old Granpa never goes anywhere he just stays in his house. In the house he has a rocking chair which he barely moves from! Granpa has a white beard and half moon glasses. He is bald exept for a patch of hair at the back. He is quite small and he has a hunchback. He lives on his own with only a black cat to keep him company. Rumours have gone that he is a wizard!


In his house there is hardly anything but a rocking chair and bed. When people visit he warns them not to go in his attic. (this could link to the tiger rug being found!)






From Christopher








Hi peter






Here is what we think the scenes should be.






Scene one should be about the Granpa's house and end the scene when the friends go into the house and the granpa warns them not to go in the attic but when the Granpa falls asleep they sneak in there and find a tiger rug!



Chris and Daniel

13 November 2009, 09:03 by Olivia


Hi pet!






Here is a description of the tiger rug.






The tiger rug has deep orange and black stripes and a menacing growl with emerald eyes still with a gleam in them, even after death. He is always under the grandfathers feet.






Here are some scenes.






SCENE 1


THE GRANDFATHER'S HOUSE


CHARACTERS : GRANDFATHER, TIGER RUG, CHILDREN THAT EVENTUALLY GO ON TIGER RUG.






granfather: Go away!






children: We were just trying to say hello. (they shrink back in fear as the tiger rug lifts his head. no-one notices.)






grandfather: (now a bit embarrased) Well, c-c-c-come on i-i-i-n.






children: All right!(they do a high five routine.)






grandfather:(standing up) I just want to let you know that you CANNOT step on or touch my tiger rug. It is DANGEROUS!






Bye for now


From


Abigail and Olivia






# 13 November 2009, 09:04 by Stephanie


Hi Peter,


We have had a brainstorm and come up with these ideas we have come up with 2 scenes on our first blog but these are continued.






Scene 3- Jumbia was working in the mountains when he saw his sister climbing up the side of the mountain (he was 13) and his sister was 12 she looked older.


Scene 4 - Lulia told her brother the news about the village and that it had been attacked and in DANGER!!!! He grew the courage to escape from the evil master (the one who cursed him) He escaped with Lulia and they found a tiger rug in the village it started talking to them and unravelled to take them across the stars!!!






Hope this gives you inspiration






from Stephanie and Cerys






# 13 November 2009, 09:04 by Daisy


Dear Pet,






My character is Mr. Figgle-Horn,






He is the man trying to chop down the tree, he can be very rude and has a HUGE belly. He always wears a suit, which is green felty stuff, with a checkered shirt . He is freds dad. Walks with belly wobbling and holds his trousers up.






Scene 1






~ Fred goes to house


~ Finds rug sit down on it song cumz on so he obeys the rules


~ Goes 2 tell Grandapa Will but he is asleep.


~ Fred overhears Mr. Figglehorn, about chopping down the tree.






Scene 2






~ Tiger rug flies Fred falls off bangs head


~ Fred runs off screaming like Peter Wynne willson.


~ Covered in bubblewrap fred climbs on rug






Scene 3






~ Tiger flies at Mr. Figglehorn


~ Freds friend Bertha holds Figgle horn down.






Scene 4






~ Figglehorns really ugly wife who looks like Peter (she looks like a guy)


gets scared and shows bloomers!






~ Mr Figgle Horn gets so scared him so he holds his hands up! therefore his trousers fall down! Hes wearing care bear panties. Then he thinks hez kwl so putz on his shadez.










Scene 5






~ tiger turns into rug again


~ Fred startz cryin


~ But whenz he hearz Mr + Mrs figglehorn are movin to Alaska










Signed






Jed and fred (will and Daisy)






























# 13 November 2009, 09:04 by Bailey


Characters






Singing squirrel:






He is fat, cheeky, annoying and terrible at singing, lives in a tree outside a haunted mansion. He is brown and red, he has a bushy tail to.






Scene 1






It was morning and the singing squirrel had just woke up. Some children heard the squirrel singing and ran to there granddad who lives in a old hauted mansion. There granddad was asleep. They franticly try to wake him up, but it was no use.






Scene 2






As the granddad awoke he told them a story about that squirrel. They listened very carefully and wondered how the granddad knew because he was asleep. While the squirrel carried on singing dreadfully the children got out of the house.






Scene 3






The chidren saw a tiger rug and wondered what it does so they sat on it...... They were traveling back in time to when the old people were young and the squirrel was good at singing.






Scene 4






The children were amazased what a rug could do and what they saw, they saw there granddad young, enjoying him self, he was fit and active not like now he's old and wrinkely.






Scene 5






The children thought there granddad saw them and they got caught and went back to there normal life and told there granddad that story that happened to them on the rug.










The end














Best wishes Bailey and James






13 November 2009, 09:06 by Christopher


hi Pet






scene two


the granpa wakes up to find the friends with the rug and the children suddenly dissapear into thin air! before they dissapear he musters all his strentgh and jumps onto the rug with them!














Chris and Dan #

 

13 November 2009, 09:07 by Ellen


hi Pet!!


There is treasure under a tree and a tiger is guarding it. He is strong, and magical. There is also an evil squirrel, who is a power maniac. He dreams of taking over the world.


SCENE 1


the evil squirrel meets the tiger and gets into a magical fight.


SCENE 2


Colours spash across the stage.


SCENE 3


The evil squirrel defeats the tiger and runs to the tree.


SCENE 4


The squirrel cuts down the tree and squishes the tiger.


SCENE 5


The tiger turns into a magic dream rug and gives dreams so mysterious and happpy to children.






Its an end to a new begining!!






Bye Peter!!






From Ellen

13 November 2009, 09:08 by Olivia


Hi Pet nice to see again.






This is another discription of a character. Lilia she is Korean and she is 12 years old and has 2 brothers, 3 sisters and long silky black hair down to her waist.She is always very bouncy and bright and nothing ever stops her spirits rising, and nothing stops her being her self. She hardly ever gets into trouble even though she is a very dreamy girl.














Cya later


From Abigail and Olivia