Friday, October 23, 2009

A good idea from Daniel

21 October 2009, 12:53 by Daniel



To Petre






The man in the rocking chair could be as old as the tiger. So he was born ONCE UPON A TIGER!! The squirrel that sings badly could deafen the vilage!! The tiger is affected to!! So he climbs up the tree and stops the squirrel but he falls off the tree and becomes a tiger rug!! Once upon a tiger when the old people were young the man in the rocking chair played in the tree!!






From






Daniel






# 23 October 2009, 05:44 by Peter W W


Nice, Daniel, yes.






By the way, I think you may have written the opening line of the play;






'Once upon a tiger, when the old people were young....'






I really like it, because it could mean just 50 years ago when the old man was a child, or it could mean long long ago in a different time before anyone had grown up or grown old, which sounds like a really magic kind of time...






thank you






Peter

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